Improve your writing skills

I have been asking you constantly to improve your writing skill. I know it has been difficult.
Anyway, believe it is possible!  Let's boost your writing!!

One of the first things you should avoid are the older expressions that you have been using since you were little kids, for instance:

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Of course, you've got other expressions that should be replaced, namely "good" among others ("but", "and"...)

In addition, you should  use not only  "upgraded" adjectives, for example:

But also "upgraded" adverbs. Remember that adverbs appear in your sentences after the verb to be, before other verbs and between auxiliary and main verbs:

Along with all these tips, you mustn't forget about connectors (linking words). In your e-mail, you've got some, but I'm going to give you some more:

10 graders: How to write a biography

How to write a Biography:

Basic personal details (family, date of birth, major accomplishments, impact on society)

-Written in chronological order

-Create impact on the reader by writing in the beginning interesting info

10 graders: Writing a comment

Structure and Content:

1/  Introduction: 

   Define the issue your are talking about.

     Use the introduction to grab the reader's attention. Then, discuss and provide a short overview on what you think and why.

2/   Opinion and Reasons:
Give reasons for your opinion.  

3/ Conclusion:

    Summarize the most important arguments which best support your opinion.