Improve your writing skills

I have been asking you constantly to improve your writing skill. I know it has been difficult.
Anyway, believe it is possible!  Let's boost your writing!!

One of the first things you should avoid are the older expressions that you have been using since you were little kids, for instance:

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Of course, you've got other expressions that should be replaced, namely "good" among others ("but", "and"...)

In addition, you should  use not only  "upgraded" adjectives, for example:

But also "upgraded" adverbs. Remember that adverbs appear in your sentences after the verb to be, before other verbs and between auxiliary and main verbs:

Along with all these tips, you mustn't forget about connectors (linking words). In your e-mail, you've got some, but I'm going to give you some more: